Title: For Whatever We Lose
Age Category: Young Adult
Genre: Contemporary #ownvoices
Word Count: 65,000
Pitch:
Day one: they leave Miami.
Day three: the ship stalls as a hurricane approaches.
Day five…all hell breaks loose.
Diverse Breakfast Club meets Titanic when high school students’ dream trip turns nightmarish.
First 250 Word of Manuscript:
“Did you pack your medicine, mija?”
Alex’s palms itched with sweat, and she rubbed them on her shorts. Did she unplug her flat iron? Did she pack enough underwear? Did she lock her bedroom door? Why hadn’t she heard from Miles yet? Did he get her last eight texts? Maybe he got into an accident. Maybe the trip had even been cancelled.
“Alexandra, I asked you a question,” her abuela trilled through the car’s speakerphone, tongue thick with a Cuban accent.
“Si, Abuelita. The medicine is in my bags.” She probably missed her trip. Now she’d never get the scholarship. She plucked a few white threads from the rip in her fraying shorts and wound them tightly around her fingertip until it plumped and reddened. Wincing at the pain, she yanked the threads tighter.
Her abuela sighed. “Nina, did you check?”
After a few seconds of silence punctuated by static, Alex nudged her sister’s arm.
Nina pulled to a stop at the red light. “No,” she said, smacking her gum and picking up her phone. She updated her Instagram with a quick selfie—all cleavage and duck face. “Pero I made sure she packed tons of condoms.”
Alex shrank into the passenger seat, her ears reddening, and mouthed, “I’m going to murder you.”
“¿Como?” Abuela’s voice curled up at the end.
“Bottoms, Abuelita. You know, for her bikinis?”
Great query! I’d love to see more. Please send the first 3 chapters to: TPAqueries@gmail.com, and put “PitMad Requested Mat., Title of ms, Genre, Last name” in the subject line. Paste the sample chapters into the body of the email please. Thank you! ~ Tina P. Schwartz, The Purcell Agency, LLC
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I’d love to take a look at this! You get a Gumdrop Pass!
Please Query + 1st 50 pages attached as a word document to: rena (at) thedeborahharrisagency (dot) com
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This gets a Gumdrop Pass from me! I love YA set on ships! Sweet! The Trouble With Destiny! Yes please!
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I’d love to read this as I go down Gumdrop Pass! Please send the first 50 pages, query and synopsis to chquery [at] mcintoshandotis [dot] com with Pitch Madness request in the subject line.
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Candy Castle! (Query + full manuscript) Please email me at LBiagi@jvnla.com with the material as an attachment and Pitch Madness in the subject line. If you’re able to include a synopsis as well, that would be awesome. Cannot wait to dive in!
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Hi! I’d love to see more! Can you send the query and first page to penelope@gelfmanschneider.com with #PitchMadness in the subject line? Thanks so much!
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Love the sibling dynamic! Excited to read more. Gumdrop Pass – Query/synopsis and first 50 pages to: kari@bradfordlit.com 🙂
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Request to take the Cherry Pitfalls! Please send the query and the first 100 pages (attached as a Word document) to queries [at] parkliterary [dot] com. Please paste the query into both the body of the email and the first page of the Word document. Put “Pete Knapp – Pitch Madness” in the subject line.
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Request to take the Cherry Pitfalls! Please send the query and the first 100 pages (attached as a Word document) to queries [at] parkliterary [dot] com. Please paste the query into both the body of the email and the first page of the Word document. Put “Blair Wilson – Pitch Madness” in the subject line.
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Cherry pitfalls for me, please. I’d love to see the query and first 100 pages. Please feel free to send to me at lara@andreabrownlit.com with “Requested: PitMad” in the subject line. Thank you!
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I’d love to take a look at this. Will you please send the query, first 50 pages, and synopsis to submissions@rnliterary.com? Thanks!
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This sounds amazing! Please query me at http://QueryMe.Online/1067 and put Pitch Madness in the referral section. Thank you!
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